Pharmacy GFX

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Im new to Photoshop but here are some of my stuff I made......


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It may be terrible but if you have tutorials on how to put more backrounds and post them here that would help

i mean erase ^^

i love 1st but second is bad

- cannot see the word
- and render a bit blur
- lightning effect is not good

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I need rates/comments/+Reps

Hmm'z.. on the left side.. those yellow C4Ds should be removed :/... and the right side is quite plain.. also, you need to work on the border.. black and white border o.0..

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It looks great, cept for one little thing. That space under the arm, the background has a flow that is going in a vertical direction which really really distracts me (also since its in the dead center its hard to miss). Other than that fun signature, lots of motion and blending work. Oh almost forgot one more thing, I suggest you darken the edges so your render stands out more.

i new i forgot something lol and it was the burn thx for the reminder

You followed a tut on sigtuts I guess, but I like what you did with the text and the way you put some flow into the image.

Though, you should also focus the face little bit more since it's covered by that smoke thing

Also, try to do what YiYi said to focus more on the render and it will be really good.

As I said before, I really like what you did with the text

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rates/comments and reps :/

Just one colour? :S Look, it's your own style OK, but try colourful works too

Nice improvement by the way but i was thinking maybe you should add some gradient map to reduce your light and also kill the light white on the center. The rest is good, keep up the good work as always. ;]

Good signature, but I think you need more depth. By that I mean have more of a progression with the way the shadows move across your signature. This will make your signature pop more.

thx for the comments but where are my reps?

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feels like this sig bumped me up to a new step

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first time ive done this o.0

1 Sig is amazing, good flow and lighting as well as good text and render placement. Definitely bumped you up to the upper echelons. As for the pop out the effect defeated the entire pop out effect. Make your signature even bigger with the transparent background and make sure |EVERYTHING| stays in your signature.

nice sig

ask for rep ? nah i only do rep for rep o.o jk


why dont you ask Guest to give u rep?

since when do i come into this

First one is better. 10/10 for it. However second one is a bit weird. I tried a work like that. Same result. 7/10 for it.

Lolz.. it's just a code thingy.. I wanna know how to do this x[

Anywayz.. for your first one.. it's nisch.. as YiYi said.. good flow.. nisch lighting.. although as you can see from the render.. it should be coming from the top left side.. but still good.. quite plain though.. the second one is nisch.. good blending.. but when making a pop out one.. you usually wouldn't have a background to it.. I mean the part poped out should be just the render..

thx for the comments and rates

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No no no :S No need that white brush :S Just use Light Source :S 7.5/10 Put the text more bottom

white brush? thers a difference in smudging and 'white brush' lol and i put the text wher it is now so it can be better to see, if i put it more bottom then it would be in that shading

The idea is good, BUT :

The text is a BIT too little. Make it bigger by 1-2 px

The smudging was pretty good, but that white is just too plain.

You screwed up a little bit with smudging in the top-left corner.

The render is not clear enough.

Lighting can be improved.

Final Rating : 7.5/10

That white is way too blinding o.0 Other than that good stuff again ^_^

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This is pretty awesome

FIX :

The left side feels like it's a bit too empty, but that is just me

The text can't be read easily, make it bigger/put it somwhere else.

Feels like it's a bit too sharp, but again that is just me xP


Final Rating : 9/10

Little too bright, seems like you kill the body with it o.o Empty side, maybe fill it with your name and/or some inspiring or cool words But otherwise, it looks sweet

8.5/10