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    Post by Zerix Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:02 am

    My fan fic ill release a new chapter daily probably, hope you like it =P



    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER ONE: THE ERUPTING VULCAN

    We start this story with a duel that has already been started. After Mike, a young teenager in Duel Academy, bumps into a very easily-enraged Slifer Red, this leads to a duel which we will tune into now

    Mike: Alright its my turn Mr. No-Name

    Mike LP = 1000
    No-Name LP =2000

    Mike has no monsters or set magic/trap cards on his side of the field while No-Name has D.D. Survivor [4*1800/200] in attack mode


    Mike: I draw, and what do you know just what i needed to end this duel, First i summon Blackwing - Sirocco the Dawn [5*2000/900] in attack mode.

    BLACKWING-SIROCCO THE DAWN:If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing.

    Mike: then i activate lightning vortex by discarding one card i can destroy your DD Survivor!

    *Mike discards Dark Armed Dragon and lightning comes down and destroys DD Survivor

    Mike: Now sirocco end this duel!

    Sirocco lunges at No-Name and he is defeated, holograms fade

    Mike: Your very quiet for someone who just lost a duel

    No-Name: My name is Gary

    Gary: You better not bump into me again or things wont go so easily for you.

    Gary walks away to his next class

    Mike: Strange guy...and hes made me late to class Mr. Vulcan is gonna erupt!

    Mike runs to his next class

    Mr. Vulcan Glad you decided to join us Mike, what's your excuse this time?

    Mike: Im sorry Mr. Vulcan i got caught up in a duel with some Slifer named Gary

    Everyone laughs

    Mr. Vulcan I'm sorry to disappoint you but there is no Slifer by the name of Gary to my knowledge

    Mike: Well your knowledge is wrong...no offence....

    Mr. Vulcan: Well lets see how our knowledges pair against each other, Mike get your duel disk out!

    Mike: Alright!!

    Both players get their duel disks out and the LP are set to 4000

    Vulcan and Mike: Duel!

    Vulcan: I'll start this off, now kids pay attention to see how a real duel goes on

    Vulcan Draws

    Vulcan: I summon Volcanic Rat [1*500/500] in attack mode! then ill throw down two face downs and end my turn

    Mike: My turn, I draw...Perfect!...Alright kids lets show Mr. Vulcan here how to really play duel monsters! I activate Heavy storm

    Vulcan: uh-oh

    Sakuretsu armor and mirror force get destroyed

    Mike: Now ill activate Black Whirlwind [When a "Blackwing" monster is Normal Summoned to your side of the Field, you can add 1 "Blackwing" monster from your Deck to your hand that has less ATK than that monster.]
    Now i summon Blackwing Sirocco the dawn and thanks to black whirlwind i can add blackwing- gale the whirlwind [3*1300/400] to my hand which now i can special summon along with blackwing-bora the spear [4*1700/800]

    BLACKWING-GALE: If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Gale the Whirlwind", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can halve the ATK and DEF of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls.

    BORA THE SPEAR: If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Bora the Spear", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

    Mike: Talk about pulling a Crow Hogan, now i activate siroccos effect which makes gale's total attack 5000

    Vulcan: Enough of this you did a missplay you will stay in for school detention

    Holograms fade, Vulcan leaves the room

    Mike: Missplay? What did i do?

    Bell rings everyone leaves except Mike
    Vulcan comes in the room


    Vulcan: Mikey, Mikey, Mikey what will i ever do with you?

    TO BE CONTINUED


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    Post by WilBer Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:11 pm

    I have read this i think Smile

    lol waiting for next chapter
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    Post by DanceJonDance Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:16 pm

    Lol twilight duel academy? O.o
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    Post by exo2400 Mon Nov 23, 2009 1:18 am

    wow that's a story can't wait for the second part
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    Post by Zerix Tue Nov 24, 2009 12:51 am

    Sorry about that guys, today ill post two chapters, enjoy =D

    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER TWO: A CELESTIAL ENCOUNTER

    Mike: Mr. Vulcan im positive i didnt make a misplay if i did it was an accident.. im sorry

    Vulcan: Well Mike im going to make you clean this classroom anyhow so you might as well do it

    Mike: No!

    Vulcan: What?!?!

    Mike: im not gonna do this..i didnt do anything wrong and you know it now if you'll excuse me i have a show to catch

    Mike runs out to go home completely disregarding the teachers yelling for him to come back

    Back at home...


    Mike: Hey sis whats for dinner

    SILENCE

    Mike: sis?

    SILENCE

    Mike: Jaime!!

    Mike runs out to see a screeching car and he gets a glimpse of his sister, Jaime, in the back seat all tied up

    Mike: Oh no!

    Mike gets his bike and tries to catch up to the car with his sister in it
    it was a long limousine which only a very rich person could afford


    Mike:(in thoughts) theres only one person in town with that much money....the head of duel academy

    The car finally loses Mike, Mike's bike trips and makes Mike fall to the ground. Mike is unconscious
    When Mike finally wakes up he is laying on a soft cloud surrounded by Angels


    Mike: Am..am i dead?

    An angel with an hourglass steps up

    Angel with hourglass: According to your Death Hourglass your time is not done yet, my name is Death, but you can call me Time.

    Another angel steps up, this one looks amazing he has crow-like wings and armor like a knight

    Angel: My name is Castiel
    Castiel: Come with me and i will explain what is going on

    Mike: I just wanna wake up from this dream and save my little sister shes in trouble!

    Castiel: you will accomplish all that and more if you just come with me

    Seeing as there's no other choice Mike goes with Castiel they walk a good distance away from the other angels and begin to talk

    Mike: who were those angels back there?

    Castiel: They, including myself, are angels who have been given one more chance to be reedemed, and well...actually why bore you with all this talk when we can duel

    Mike: but arent you like some sort of spirit, how can you duel?

    Castiel: let's find out shall we?

    Mike: i never back down from a challenge so bring it on

    All the other angels turn into cards and form a deck in the air on Castiels arm, as if he were wearing an invisible duel disk

    LP are set to 4000


    Mike: Lets do this! ill start off, i draw, alright i activare black whirlwind then i summon BW Bora the spear in attack mode, now whirlwind lets me retrieve a BW Gale the whirlwind from my deck then i can special summon that! Now i synchro summon....
    BW Armor Master[7*2500/1500] in Attack mode, ill throw a face down and end my turn

    Castiel: you are a strong duelist but you still have much to learn my turn! i draw, i activate the magic card Cost Down [Discard 1 card from your hand. Downgrade all Monster Cards in your hand by 2 Levels until the End Phase of the turn this card is activated.] by discarding
    Black Dusk Angel
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    I can summon White Dawn Angel
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    and when that monster is summoned can get Black Dusk Angel to my hand which then can be special summoned, like you i am also synchro summoning i summon
    Light and Darkness Angel
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    Once per turn you can change the attribute of this card to Dark, or to Light. Activate one of these effects based on the attribute.
    -Light: Your opponents monsters cannot attack, be destroyed by battle, change positions, or be tributed.
    -Dark: Your opponents monster are changed to attack position and must attack each turn.

    I keep his attribute Dark, i throw down two cards then i attack, Light and Darkness Angel
    dark smash! attack his armor master

    L & D Angel Attacks Armor Master ... nothing happens

    Mikes LP - 4000
    Castiel LP - 4000

    ARMOR MASTER: This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and you take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. If this card attacks a monster, you can place 1 Wedge Counter on that monster at the end of the Damage Step (max. 1). You can remove all Wedge Counters from your opponent's monsters to reduce the ATK and DEF of each monster that had a Wedge Counter to 0, until the End Phase.

    Mike: Nice try, but its my turn i Draw that was a nice move but it wont be a match for this I special summon BW bora the spear then i normal summon BW elphin the raven [6*2200/1200]

    ELPHIN - If you control a face-up "Blackwing" monster, you can Normal Summon this card without Tributing. When this card is Normal Summoned , you can change the Battle Position of 1 monster your opponent controls.


    Mike: Then i switch your light and darkness angel to --

    Castiel: i activate bottomless trap hole on elphin the raven

    Mike: Grr...no matter i still have to attack, Armor Master attack L & D Angel, as you already know i can leave a counter on him and when i remove it its attack changes to 0, so now i activate Armor Master' effect

    Castiel: Wrong again, i activate Divine Wrath [Discard 1 card from your hand. Negate the activation of an Effect Monster's effect and destroy that Effect Monster.] I discard angel of death and your Armor Master is Destroyed

    Mike: Then i end my--

    Castiel: do you like being wrong all the time? L & D Angel's effect MAKES you attack which means your bora still attacks my Angel

    Bora attacks the Angel, gets destroyed and Mike's LP drops to 2800

    Mike: i end my turn by placing two cards face down

    Castiel: i draw, now i activate giant trunade all cards go back to their owners hand, Light and Darkness Angel attack directly

    Mikes LP dros to 0
    holograms fade, Castiel stretches his hand to pick up Mike


    Castiel: Come with me and i will tell you how to save your sister, and possible the world

    TO BE CONTINUED

    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 3: Angels vs Dinosaurs

    After going with Castiel Mike learned that it wasnt the head of Duel Academy, but someone...something much MUCH more dangerous

    Mike: Who..or What would want to take over the world, and what does my sister have to do with this?

    Castiel: They call themselves "The Risen." We..and The Risen think that your sister might be one of the Fallen Angel, and if The Risen have a fallen angel they can use her light powers to gain control of the world

    Mike: My sister?!! but..how what...she doesnt even have wings...

    Castiel: ..you will understand as time passes for now i will accompany you wherever you go in a spirit form and you will put The Fallen Angel cards in your deck as an addition to your blackwing deck, you will save your sister, the world and us, now i return you to your home...try to get some sleep i will see you tomorrow

    Mike: Wait! i still want to know more

    A bright light flashes and consumes Mike
    Now he is at his house


    Mike: how can i sleep with my sister gone and i cant do anything about it...

    Castiel: Very well then, Time, work your magic

    Angel of Death Appears out of her card
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    and turns the Hourglass in her hand
    it is now the next day at 7:50 AM time for school
    Angel of Death goes back to her card


    Mike: Awh crap im going to be late, and i bet Mr. Vulcan is still mad at me...probably a week's detention...

    Mike goes to school without eating or changing clothes he gets there at 8:01 just a minute late

    ???: Alright whos up first?

    Mike: Im sorry im late again Mr. Vulca--wait who are you?

    ???: I am Ms. Rax
    Ms. Rax: Mr. Vulcan got fired last night

    Castiel: (in Mike's ear) your welcome

    Rax: just have a seat--wait since your late you'll be my first opponent, alright class lets pay attention to how we both try to use combos

    Mike: Alright lets do this

    Both players get their duel disks out and the LP are set to 4000


    Rax: Alright ladies first so i draw

    Castiel:(to Mike) not much of a lday if you ask me

    Mike:(to Castiel) i thought you were supposed to be an angel

    Castiel:(to mike) we have our own sets of faults, too

    Rax: Alright stop mumbling to yourself over there and lets get started i special summon Gilasaurus [3*1400/400]

    GILASAURUS: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do this, your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster from their Graveyard.

    and since you have no monsters in your grave theres no benefit for you, next i activate Big Evoution Pill [Tribute 1 Dinosaur-Type monster to activate this card. This card remains face-up on the field for 3 of your opponent's turns. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon or Set Dinosaur-Type monsters without Tributing.]
    By tributing Gilasaurus i can summon without tribute, and since i special summoned Gilasaurus i can normal summon Super Conductor Tyranno [8*3300/1400] i'll set two cards face down and ill end my turn

    Class is cheering

    Mike: Nice combo but now its my turn and it wont end too lightly, i draw, no combos this time so ill throw down a monster activate
    Flight Lessons
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    This card cannot be removed from the field by the opponents spell, trap, or monster effects. As long as this card is face up winged-beast monsters on your side of the field cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation applies normally) If you take battle damage from a battle including a winged-beast monster your opponent takes half the battle damage as you did. and ill end my turn

    Rax: wont end too lightly right? well anyhow its my turn, i draw alright get ready for this, i Summon Black Tyranno [7*2600/1800] and now i get to attack your life points directly

    BLACK TYRANNO: If your opponent controls no cards except Defense Position Monster Cards, this card can attack your opponent directly
    Black Tyranno, attack directly!

    Black Tyranno jumps over the face down monster and attacks Mike directly

    Mikes LP: 1400
    Rax: 4000


    Rax: Then ill attack your face down with Super Conductor Tyranno

    Card flips up and is a
    Solemn Angel

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    Rax: i'll end my turn by placing a face down card

    Mike:
    alright my turn, i draw, first i activate heavy storm then i play two cards face down and i...(to Castiel) im not too familiar with this deck what do i do?

    Castiel: Just remember our duel, here let me help you

    Castiel turns into a card and goes in Mike's hand

    Mike:
    Alrigght i sacrifice Solemn Angel to summon
    Castiel, the Angel Knight in attack mode
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    now i end my turn

    Rax: big mistake, sounds like you have a lot to learn lets end this now shall we, my turn i draw

    Mike: not so fast! first i activate drop off which destroys the card you just drew, then i pay 500 lifee point to end your turn with
    Death's Hourglass
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    Mikes LP: 900
    Rax LP: 4000


    GASPS

    Mike: now its MY turn, i draw, alright now i activate Cost Down which means i can summon
    White Dawn Angel in attack mode
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    Then i activate its effect, which lets me bring to my hand a
    Black Dusk Angel, which by that effect i can special summon it in attack mode
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    Now i activate Angel's Assassin Effect
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    You can reveal this card in your hand, during your Main Phase, to send all cards in your hand to the graveyard. If this card is sent to the graveyard by this effect, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field for every "Angel" monster you sent to the graveyard by this effect.
    Since i sent it and trap stun to the graveyard i can destroy one monster on your side of the field and i choose Super Conductor Tyranno, then i can Special summon Angel's Assassin in attack mode, now you may not have noticed but i have 4 angel monsters on the field which means Castiel gains an additional 800 attack boost which makes his new attack 3300.
    Now, Angel's Assassin attack his Black Tyranno,

    Angel's Assasin gets his sword out and slashes Black Tyranno, black tyranno is destroyed

    Now, Black Dusk Angel attack Directly

    Rax's LP drop to 2800
    End this duel, Castiel

    Castiel's wings spread as wide as the whole field, he flies up high and dives down gracefully winning the duel
    Rax's LP drop to 0
    Holograms fade


    Rax: Stay after class Mike i need to speak to you

    Mike: AGAIN!?!?! see this is why no one likes teachers

    TO BE CONTINUED
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    Post by exo2400 Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:20 am

    that is very creative making ur own cards and deck for the story pretty cool althought i would have expected angels to be fairy types and not winged-beast but hey its ur cards
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    Post by Zerix Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:28 am

    Yeah lol, well its sorta a Winged-Beast deck supporter, and some of the overpowered ones have been changed, i posted the list of them and if it says "EDIT" i re-worded it or made it less overpowered, and it includes a banlist.
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    Post by exo2400 Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:31 am

    wow that is cool.i'm inspired i might write a story too king
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    Post by Zerix Tue Nov 24, 2009 4:26 am

    Lol, glad i could inspire someone, and in fact a good friend of mine inspired me to write this fan fic.
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    Post by wolverine Tue Nov 24, 2009 7:37 pm

    this story is awesome i can't wait for the next chapter.
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    Post by Zerix Tue Nov 24, 2009 8:31 pm

    Heres the fourth, Enjoy.

    CHAPTER 4: The Hidden Ones

    After, Ms. Rax and Mikes duel the bell rings everyone leaves except Mike, Ms. Rax and a girl who stops to talk to Mike

    Girl: Hi..Mike, is it? uhm my name is Jaime
    Jaime: I just wanted to say, that i love that winged-beast deck is awesome, uhm i want to give you this as a present

    Jaime gives Mike an envelope and leaves

    Mike: Thanks...

    Ms. Rax: you can open that at home Mike, i wanted to talk to you about your deck, you have creatures i've never seen before, and im just wondering where you got them

    Mike: they were a gift

    Rax: is there anyway i can contact whom ever gave these cards to you?

    Mke: uhh...

    Castiel: I dont trust her look into her eyes

    Her eyes were marvelous, her pupil was red with a bit of black

    Rax: you see Mike, my first name is Angela
    Angela: I am sure and positive that you know about...The Fallen ones and the The Risen, but i doubt you know about The Hidden Ones....

    Mike: im sorry Angela i dont know what--

    Castiel: wait let her talk we might be able to get something out of this

    Mike: nevermind

    Angela: the Hidden Ones are so secretive that the only person who knows about them is their members, and now you, see the Fallen Angels are angels that did something wrong and were downgraded but given another shot to redeem themselves, and the Risen Ones were demonic angels who were risen up to the earth to wreck havoc upon it, but the Hidden Ones are both kinds of angels that have decided to break the rules and reside as normal living humans

    Mike: wh-what kind are you?

    Angela: (very silently) i am...a RISEN ONE (now yelling) and i must get a hold of your deck

    Angela jumps on top of her deck and transforms into an angel with red wings

    Demon-Angela: and in order to get lowered back to my home i must get a hold of one of your cards and take it to...our king

    Angela grabs mike by his shirt collar and lifts him up

    Mike: CASTIEL!!!

    Castiel: guys we gotta help him

    Angela reaches for his deck but the cards turn into monsters before she can reach them
    Angela raises her hand and throws mike to a corner then a cage fell around Mike


    Castiel: we cant afford this! guys help Mike out

    A light shines bright from Castiel and switches places with Mike, now Castiel is in the cage and Mike is with the other angels

    Mike: duel me! for Castiel, if i win hes free and you leave, if you win...you can take me as well

    Castiel: no!!!

    Demon-Angela: i accept, get your duel disk out this is gonna get ugly

    Castiel: NOOO

    The angels form a deck in Mike's duel disk, and angela forms an outer wall around the cage so Castiel can't be heard
    They both get their duel disk out and the LP is set to 4000


    Demon-Angela: Foolish mortal now you will see what a real duel is like...in the Dark Side!!!

    Mike: whatt

    Demon-Angela: Dark Side activate! surround this foolish mortal and myself so he knows what real pain feels like

    Darkness surrounds both players as they draw their opening hand, Mike understands that a duel in the Dark Side means he will feel the pain of his monsters

    Demon-Angela: its ladies first, so make your move

    Mike: i'll take that....now i draw i place one monster face down in defense and i'll throw two face downs and end my turn

    Demon-Angela: that was weak let me show you how to really duel, i draw, i summon DD Survivor [4*1800/200] in attack mode then--

    Mike: i activate bottomless traphole which removes it from play

    Demon-Angela: ill place one card face down and end my turn

    DD Survivor comes back to the field

    DD SURVIVOR: When this card is removed from play while face-up on your side of the field, you Special Summon it during the End Phase.

    Mike: alright i draw, i place one card face down, then i flip summon Solemn Angel
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    then i activate Shield and Sword [Switch the original ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters on the field until the end of this turn. Any additions and subtractions to ATK and DEF due to card effects are applied to the new ATK and DEF. Monsters summoned after this card's activation are excluded.]
    Now your Survivors attack is 200 while my angel's is 2500, now Solemn Angel attack!

    Solemn attacks DD Survivor and destroys him
    Angela's LP drop down to 1700

    I'll end my turn

    Shield and sword disappears

    Demon-Angela: I draw, ok now the real duel begins lets hope your ready for this you foolish mortal

    Mike: if you call me that one more time i swear i will *censored* [=P]

    TO BE CONTINUED
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    Post by wolverine Tue Nov 24, 2009 8:43 pm

    it was awesome keeps me wondering about who is gonna win. i hope mike does
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    Post by Zerix Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:48 pm

    enjoy

    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 5: The Hidden Ones Part 2

    We left off in the middle of Mike and Angela's duel. Mike had summoned Solemn Angel and Angela had DD Survivor in her field, but using Shield and Sword Mike was able to attack DD Survivor, destroy him and reduce Angela's LP

    Angela LP: 1700
    Mike LP: 4000
    It is currently Angela's turn, Mike has one face down and Solemn angel on his side of the field


    Demon-Angela: Now special summon Evil Hero Infernal Prodigy [2*300/600]
    INFERNAL PRODIGY: If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Attack Position. If you Tribute this card to Tribute Summon an "Elemental Hero", "Destiny Hero", or "Evil Hero" monster, draw 1 card during this turn's End Phase.

    Then i Tribute Infernal Prodigy to summon Evil Hero Malicious Edge [7*2600/1800]

    MALICIOUS EDGE: If your opponent controls a monster, you can Normal Summon this card with 1 Tribute. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

    Then i activate Double Summon with this i can normal summon another monster and i summon Evil Hero Infernal Gainer [4*1600/0] then i remove it from play so my Edge can attack twice

    INFERNAL GAINER:During your Main Phase 1, you can remove this card from play and select 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control. That monster can attack twice during each Battle Phase. Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position during your second Standby Phase after you activate this effect.
    Now Edge! attack solemn angel

    Edge throws himself to Solemn Angel she is destroyed mikes LP drops to 2600

    Heh..i guess you weren't as good a duelist as those winged...rats thought you were
    Edge! End this duel

    Edge attacks mike...BUT WAIT a force field protects mike and his life points climb to 5200

    Mike: you didnt think i'd go down that easy did you, Angela, i activated Draining Shield [Negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters and gain Life Points equal to its ATK.]

    Demon-Angela: No matter, you will still lose next turn, ill end for now

    Angela LP: 1700
    Miked LP: 5200


    Mike: My move (to himself) im still not familiar with this deck much, i've only used it once...i need help...Castiel if only you could help

    Mikes deck shines and out comes Angel of Death, Angela seems un aware of whats happening...she sees everything normal

    Death: I may not be Castiel but i can still help you!

    Mike: Really?! thats awesome! alright well lets see here, i have Angel's knight which seem like i could pull off some sort of combo if i use his second effect

    To Angela, Mike seems like hes concentrating on his next move, it doesnt even seem like he's talking

    Death: You learn fast, young man it seems that you could also add Angel's Assassin into the equation to make a better move

    Mike: Good idea! Alright, now i summon
    Angel's Knight,
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    i play two face downs, then i activate Angel's Knight's Effect i can attack you directly
    Angel Knight swords slash glide!

    Angel knight attacks Angela her LP drop to 500

    Demon-Angela: Very well played but may i remind you my Edge can still attack twice! and if i summon an additional monster i can take you down next turn

    Mike: who ever said i was finished?
    Now Knights Effect lets me search my deck and add any monster card to my hand and i choose Fairy Knight
    NOW i end my turn

    Mike has 4 cards in his hand

    Death: Nice move Mike

    Mike: but shes right i cant activate Assassin's effect only during my main phase plus none of my face downs will help me

    Death: But that can change...remember who i am

    Death lifts up her hourglass and throws it into one of Mike's face down cards

    Mike: thanks death i know what to do now!

    Demon-Angela: alright now its my move i draw then ill set three card face down and--

    Mike: and thats about it cause i activate Death's Hourglass by paying 500 life points i can automatically end your turn

    Mikes LP drop to 4700
    It is now Mikes Turn


    Mike: and now its my turn, i draw alright ill place another card face down then ill activate Angel's Assassin's Effect
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    You can reveal this card in your hand, during your Main Phase, to send all cards in your hand to the graveyard. If this card is sent to the graveyard by this effect, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field for every "Angel" monster you sent to the graveyard by this effect.

    I discard my whole hand

    Angel's Assassin, Fairy Knight, Black Dusk Angel, and Jar of Greed

    Mike: and since two Angel monsters went to the graveyard i can destroy your Edge, one face down, and i can special summon Angel's Assassin in attack position, next i activate Monster Reborn to special summon from my grave
    Fairy Knight
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    Then, i'll synchro summon, by releasing Angel's Knight and Fairy Knight,
    Fairy Angel of War, in attack position, which lets me return the tuned monsters back
    to my deck
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    this is it Angela, get ready now Angel's Assassin attack her directly!

    Demon-Angela: not so fast! remember i still have 2 cards face down well one of them is Draining Shield, and just lie yours i gain your attacking monster's total attack

    Angela's LP rises to 3100


    Mike: you might not lose this turn but you will the next, i have one more monster in attack, now Fairy Angel of War Attack directly

    Demon-Angela: boy OH BOY are you wrong, we're just getting warmed up! now i activate Magic Cylinder which re-directs Angel of Wars attack to your life points

    Mikes LP drops to 2400
    Angela's LP : 3100


    Demon-Angela: you are a strong duelist but you'll need more than some...Angels to defeat me!

    Mike: Grr....i'll end my turn

    Demon-Angela: of course you will!

    Angela Laughs Maniacally and starts her turn

    TO BE CONTINUED
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    Post by wolverine Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:54 pm

    o my god the intense is killing me.
    but there is one part i didn't get how Angel's Knight and Fairy Knight tune if they are both tuners.
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    Post by Zerix Wed Nov 25, 2009 9:17 pm

    Oh wow...well Fairy Knight isnt supposed to be a tuner is all i can say -_-"'
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    Post by exo2400 Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:35 pm

    lol seems like u made a error there. u do know that u didn't have to put effect on Angel's Knight's type
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    Post by Zerix Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:20 pm

    Ok stop pointing out all the stuff i did wrong =P
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    Post by Zerix Fri Nov 27, 2009 4:09 pm

    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 6: The Hidden Ones Part 3

    We left off during Angela and Mike's duel mike attacked with Angel's Assassin but she countered with Draining Shield, then Mike attacked with Fairy Angel of War but she countered with Magic Cylinder, current LP
    MIKE: 2400
    ANGELA: 3100
    Mike has Fairy Angel of War, Angel's Assassin, and a face down, Angela has nothing


    Demon-Angela: alright now i draw...hmm i've been thinking maybe we should wager something BIGGER than just a freeing of Castiel, how about if i win, you have to give up your like to our...King, and if you win...ill give my body to the Angel's ill join forces with them, what do you say

    Mike: Death...what do i do?

    Death: Castiel wouldn't go for it but she's very powerful and would be a big help to our forces

    Mike: its a deal!

    Death: i never said to go for it!!!

    Demon-Angela: now you cant take that back, its set and ready, now you better get ready i activate Lightning Vortex, which by discarding one card can destroy both your monsters

    Death: you'll be defenseless!?!?!

    Lightning starts to come down on both monsters


    Mike: I activate Solemn Judgement, i pay half my Life points to negate its activation

    Mike's LP drops to 1200, the lightning fades before it hits the monsters


    Demon-Angela:
    UGH, oh well i play one card face down and ill end my turn

    Mike: i draw (holding just one card) this ends now, Angela! I activate Heavy storm which destroys your face down card

    Storm blows over the face down card, Negate attack is destroyed

    Mike: Alright angel's Assassin attack directly

    Angela's LP drops to 500

    Mike: END THIS NOW!! go Fairy Angel of War, attack directly

    Angel of War shoots with his Rocket Launcher, something seems to intercede, smoke clogs up the field

    Demon-Angela: Thank Pegasus for Kuribohs!

    Mike: Grr. alright ill end my turn, and for the record...what kind of deck has a DD Survivor, Evil Heroes, and Kuribohs?

    Demon-Angela: the smart kind! now i draw (holding three cards) alright i place one card face down and ill set this monster in face down defense

    Mike: Alright! im tired of this, this must end!!!...especially your randomly assorted deck...seriously choose a card type, anyways i draw alright i attack, go Fairy Angel attack his face down

    Demon-Angela: i activate, Mirror Force

    Mike: Oh no! that destroys all attack position monsters on my side of the field

    Both monsters on Mike's side of the field are destroyed!!!

    Death: and the card in your hand wont help you...

    Mike: theres gotta bee something....i cant just lose like this

    Demon-Angela: my turn, i draw, luckily, i cant summon anything else besides my face down monster, i flip summon Magician of Faith [1*300/400]
    MAGICIAN OF FAITH: FLIP: Select 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard. Add the selected card to your hand.

    Mike: THAT CARD IS BANNED!!

    Demon-Angela: we're in the dark side, Mike, there are NO rules here, i bring double summon back to my hand, now Magician attack Mike directly with Dark Side Smash!

    Mikes lp drops to 900
    Angela's LP: 500
    Somehow with Dark Side Smash, mikes goes flying back landing on his back and the envelope falls out mike is hurt badly


    Death: Mike!!!! are you ok?

    Mike sits up, sees the envelope mysteriously given to him by Jaime and tries to pick up the envelope, but it seems heavy for him, he tries but the envelope wont budge, finally another glow occurs from the envelope, mike is almost blinded my the light and has to close his eyes when he opens his eyes, there's no envelope on the floor. but his disk glowed for about 5 seconds then it stopped

    Mike:
    uhm...yeah im ok lets keep dueling

    Demon-Angela: did that hurt, do you want a bandaid? heh i set one card face down and end my turn, your move foolish mortal

    Mike yells

    Mike: i've had just enough of your jokes Angela, your going down your gonna turn good and your gonna let Castiel go!!! My move, i draw!!! i active Allure of Darkness! [Draw 2 cards, then remove from play 1 DARK monster from your hand. If you don't have any DARK monsters in your hand to remove, send all cards in your hand to the Graveyard.]
    i remove from play Black Dusk Angel, (holding 2 cards)

    Death: looks like you needed something else, no rules, right angela? have it your way! Death raises her hand and a Pot appears in her hand she throws it at one of Mike's cards

    Mike:thanks and wait whats this other card?

    Death:im not sure i've never seen it before

    Mike: alright now i activate the Pot of Greed, which lets me draw two cards from my deck (now holding three)

    Death: i dont know any of the cards in your hand, Mike, maybe it had to do with the envelope

    Mike: then lets test them out! i activate
    Winged Reinforcement
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    which...apparently lets me summon two winged-beasts monster from my grave and i special summon Angel's Assassin and Angel's Knight Now i remove those cards from play to special summon
    ANGEL LORD!!!
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    This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by removing from play from your side of the field two "Angel" monster. When this card is special summoned destroy one card on the field This card's attack becomes the removed from play monsters' attack.

    And when its special summoned, i can destroy a card on your side of the field, and i choose your face down, Angel Lord's attack and defense is 3800

    Mirror Wall is destroyed

    Mike: Now Angela get ready to be pushed into the light! Angel Lord attack, her Magician of Faith

    Angela's LP drop to 0, then Angel Lord Goes up to her and shines and her body is changed she no longer has eyes of hatred, no longer has Demon Wings from now Demon-Angela/Angela/Ms. Rax is Angela the Dark Angel
    Angela turns into a ball of light and then into a card falling into Mike's hand
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    the cage disappears and Castiel glides up to Mike to check if he is ok


    Castiel: Mike are you OK

    Mike: Im great thanks to death

    Death: dont thank me thank that Jaime chick

    Castiel: who is jaime?

    Mysterious Girl: I am!
    A silhouette of a girl is at the door suddenly the girl-silhouetted spreads Angel-like Wings

    TO BE CONTINUED
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    Post by wolverine Sat Nov 28, 2009 12:12 am

    awesome you make awesome chapters
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    Post by Zerix Sun Nov 29, 2009 3:35 am

    Heres 2 more

    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 8: Old Friends

    Mike and Castiel are now in front of the building and Ryan is no longer there

    Mike: where'd he go? and what'd he do to Gary and Vulcan?

    Castiel: im not sure

    Mike: ok then...well lets go

    Castiel: where?

    Mike: shouldnt you know?

    Castiel: uhhh

    Mike: aaagh!! we're hopeless

    Voice: MIIIIIIIIIIIIKE!

    Mike: what was that?

    Castiel: i dont know

    Mike: well, you just dont know anything today do you

    Voice: MIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKKKKE!! stop talking to yourself and turn around

    Castiel disappears, mike turns around to see an old friend running right at him

    Mike: Larisa?!?! [Law-rih-saw]

    Larisa hugs Mike

    Mike: its been years!!

    Larisa: AGES!!

    Voice2: (panting) wait for me..guys

    Mike: oh hi, Chris!

    Chris: hi mike...hey is your sister still here?

    Larisa: he still has a crush on her

    Chris: like you on Mike

    Larisa starts to blush

    Mike: no..uhh shes out on vacation for the week so im alone, anyways what are you guys doing here?

    Larisa: what we cant come visit our best friend?

    Chris: anyways we better get going, we're getting a hotel with a pool

    Mike: well you guys can stay at my house if you want, its lonely since only im there

    Chris: nah we'd love the pool more

    Larisa: Chris! we'd love to stay at your house mike

    Chris: but the poool...

    Mike: Chris, we have an inflatable one in the backyard

    Chris: Awesome! lead the way

    Mike leads Larisa and Chris to his house and settles them in it is now 8:30 pm, friday

    Mike: so what do you guys wanna do?

    Larisa: maybe just chill out here, watch some tv..you know

    Mike: oh alright well im going to take a shower

    Chris: can i get soemthing to eat

    Mike: sure go ahead, make yourselves at home

    Mike goes into the restroom and shuts the door, it is now 9:30,
    Castiel appears


    Castiel: im worried

    Mike: about what?

    Castiel: we still dont know who that jaime girl is and she already gave us another pair of cards did you see what they were?

    Mike: no the cards are blank

    Castiel: weird

    Mike: yeah well if you excuse me im going to take a shower so leave

    Castiel: fine

    After a few minutes mike comes out of the shower and gets ready for bed it is now 10:00

    Mike: alright you guys ready for..uhh

    Mike sees that Larisa and Chris are already sleeping on the floor, he gets Chris up to his room in his bed, and as he carries Larisa to his Sister's room she wakes up

    Larisa: (yawns) Mike...

    Mike: Hi Larisa, im just taking you to my sisters bed, Chris is in mine

    Larisa: where are you gonna sleep?

    Mike: i'll just sleep in the couch

    Larisa: no mike--

    Loud crashes are heard outside, chris wakes up and rushes to where mike and larisa are, Mike puts Larisa down and peeks out the window

    Chris: you ok sis?

    Larisa: yeah, Mike whats going on?

    Mike: i dont know, i cant see anything its pitch black out there with no lights on

    Chris: Larisa go see

    Larisa goes to the window, and peeks out

    Mike: Larisa, if i didnt see anything i doubt--

    Larisa: watch out!!

    Larisa pushes mike out of the way of the window and falls on top of him, a car crashes through the window and barely misses Chris, Chris immediately runs to Larisa's side

    Mike: how did you see that?

    Larisa: lets go

    Larisa stands up, picks up Mike, grabs Chris' and Mike's hand and starts running

    Mike: care to tell me whats going on?

    Larisa: not now we have to get far away

    TO BE CONTINUED



    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 9:

    Larisa, Mike, and Chris are now behind the same building mike fell off, after a car crashed through the window of Mike's living room

    Mike: Larisa whats going on

    Larisa: shhh keep quiet they might be close

    Chris: Larisa...maybe you should just tell me

    Mike: tell me what

    Larisa:...ok...fine mike what im about to tell you might not be easy to hear but i guess now you must know it

    Mike: what is it?

    Larisa: i...i...im--

    Gunshots are heard a bullet is about to hit mike

    Larisa: Chris!!

    Chris puts his hands together and the bullet falls down before hitting mike's head as if it hit a steel wall

    Mike: woah!!

    Larisa grabs Mike and Chris by the hand and a bright light appears when the light dims out they're gone

    Mike: where are we? its pitch black!

    A light appears when mike looks for the source he sees Chris is glowing

    Mike: ok now i really need to know whats going on

    Chris: *sight*

    Larisa: ill tell you

    Mike: ok then

    Larisa: we are cherubs

    Mike: whats that

    Chris: a cherub is the rank just below angel

    Mike: are you serious!! wait how come you guys have special powers then?

    Larisa: we are cherubs because we live on earth as humans and to save people on earth we need powers

    Mike: Castiel!!!

    Larisa: what?

    Castiel appears

    Castiel: you called?

    Mike: did you know about this?

    Chris: who are you talking to?

    Mike: Castiel let them see you

    Castiel turns into human form

    Larisa: woah whered you come from?

    Castiel: im always around

    Castiel spreads his wings for a second the goes back to human form

    Chris: woah, an angel, well, we're cherubs

    Castiel: really!?!? i thought that was a myth, Mike, they'd be a good help to us

    Mike: yeah....hey guys i lied about my sister...shes not on vacation...she got kidnapped

    Chris: WHAT!?!?!?!

    Larisa: oh no!

    Castiel: Guys watch out!!

    a net falls on Chris, Larisa, and Castiel as he's trying to save them, a man walks in he is wearing a lab coat and glasses

    Man: Anti-Cherub-Magic-Net...our latest invention

    Mike: who are you!?!?!

    Man: call me Professor Kooz
    Prof. Kooz: and we want you!

    Mike: what?!?!

    Castiel: leave him alone!!

    Larisa: Mike run!

    Prof. Kooz: not quite...hes coming with me

    Mike: not without a fight!

    Prof. Kooz: get your deck out then!

    Mike and Kooz's life points are set to 4000, they both draw 5 cards, the darkness from the Dark Side surrounds both of them

    Mike: not this again....

    Kooz: ill start! i draw...hmm, i summon Krebons [2*1200/400] in attack mode i'll end there for now

    Mike: my move! i draw. alright i summon
    Solemn Angel in attack mode!
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    Then i activate Shield and Sword [Switch the original ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters on the field until the end of this turn. Any additions and subtractions to ATK and DEF due to card effects are applied to the new ATK and DEF. Monsters summoned after this card's activation are excluded.]
    which makes Solemn's attack 2500 then i set one card face down and active fissure [Destroy the 1 face-up monster your opponent controls that has the lowest ATK.]

    Kooz: uh oh

    Mike: ''uh oh'' is right Solemn Angel attack! Wing Gale attack!

    Solemn angel flaps her wings and creates a giant gale Professor Kooz's life points drop to 1500

    Mike: i end my turn

    Castiel: you show him mike!

    Chris: his whole deck is full of angels!

    Larisa: amazing!

    Kooz: ...whatever...its my turn now, i draw!... hehe perfect! I summon Magical Scientist [1*300/300] in attack mode then i pay 1000 to special summon, from my fusion deck....

    MAGICAL SCIENTIST: Pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck in face-up Attack or Defense Position. That Fusion Monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly, and is returned to your Fusion Deck at the end of the turn.

    Kooz's LP drop to 500

    Mike: oh no

    Larisa: Mike!!

    Castiel: this is gonna be big....

    Chris: you can do it mike!

    Kooz: I summon...

    TO BE CONTINUED
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    Post by Zerix Sun Nov 29, 2009 7:59 pm

    CH. 10
    Here's a short one for you guys

    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 10: Kooz the Mad Scientist

    Mike is in a duel to save his life as well as his friends, his opponent, Professor Kooz, used the dark side in the duel, and has 500 life points, mike has a full 4000, but Kooz summoned and activated Magical Scientists effect which lets him summon any fusion monster with a level of 6 or lower

    Kooz: i summon Dark Flare Knight [6*2200/800]

    Kooz: then i activate graverobber

    Mike: thats a trap!!

    Kooz: in the dark side all magic and trap cards are treated as Quick-Play MAGIC cards and you can activate them during any phase and anyones turn

    Mike: theres so much to worry about in the dark side, the field, the grave and now the hand

    Kooz: like i was saying...i activate graverobber Select 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. You can use that card as if you were its controller until the end of the turn. i activate Shield & sword which you already know switches attack and defense

    SOLEMN ANGEL: 2500atk
    FLARE KNIGHT: 800atk


    Mike: that only helps me...

    Kooz: not exactly, now Flare Knight attack his solemn angel

    Mike: you lose!

    smoke is covering the field....the smoke clears up and theres a different monster than Flare Knight

    DARK FLARE KNIGHT: Any damage to the controller of this card from battle involving this monster becomes 0. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of a battle, Special Summon 1 "Mirage Knight" from your hand or Deck.

    Kooz: Mirage Knight is on my side now, and his attack is normal, plus he has a very good effect

    [8*2800/2000]MIRAGE KNIGHT:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dark Flare Knight". When this card battles another monster, during damage calculation increase the ATK of this card by the original ATK of the opponent's monster. During the End Phase after this card was involved in battle, remove this card from play.

    Kooz: go Mirage Knight! Attack his Solemn Angel! and his effect gives him 2500 more attack points which means you lose 2800 life points!!

    Mikes LP drops to 1200
    Kooz = 500


    Kooz: lucky for you, he gets removed from play, but i can still attack with magical scientist, go my scientist attack!

    Mikes LP drop to 900

    Castiel: c'mon Mike you can recover

    Chris: show that creep who's boss

    Larisa: you can do it mike

    Mike: good move...but im sure this duel is over

    Kooz: i wouldnt be too sure

    Mike: you scientist has 300 atk and you have 500 lp i just need to get a monster with more than 799 atk points and your done for

    Kooz: lets see it then

    Mike: my move, i draw, alright now i activate, pot of greed, and jar of greed allowing me to draw 3 more cards (to himself:)hmm quite a bit of new cards, and one that looks a little like Castiel, probably the ones from the envelope...

    Kooz: i supposed to get you to the lab by 12, and its 11:30...so if you could hurry it up...

    Mike: i summon Celestial, the Angel Reinforcer
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    Castiel: what?!?!

    Chris: hey, cast that looks just like you

    Larisa: woah, shes beautiful

    Mike: Celestial, attack his Magical Scientist!

    Kooz: so predictable, i activate, from my hand, MAGIC CYLINDER which re-directs the attack back at you, meaning you lose!

    Celestial turns around and hits Mike, Mike is knocked down by the net, holograms fade

    Larisa: MIKE!

    Chris: C'mon buddy wake up!

    Castiel: NOOOOOOOOOOO

    Kooz: ooh i wonder if ill get paid this time

    TO BE CONTINUED
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    Post by wolverine Sun Nov 29, 2009 8:51 pm

    lol i wonder if i get paid this time nice stories
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    Post by Zerix Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:50 pm

    Worked hard on this one you better leave me feedback >=P

    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 11: The Secret of Jaime

    Mike was defeated by the unfairity of the Dark Side Kooz, the mad scientist, is now going to get Mike to a lab to do research on him, yet we dont know why


    Kooz: mwahahaha

    Castiel: im going to kill you when i get out of here

    Larisa: you monster!!!

    Chris: let us go and play fair!

    As kooz is about to pick up mike when someone falls on him and kicks him in the back then she spreads her wings

    ???: Leave my brother alone!!

    Castiel, Chris, & Larisa: Jaime!?!?!

    Castiel: of course! mike's sister and the mysterious card-giver have the same name...they must be the same person

    Jaime: well done, Castiel, im not sure how mike wasnt able to figure that out

    Jaime tears open the net Larisa and Castiel run immediately to Mike, Chris stays with Jaime

    Castiel: Larisa, can you heal him?

    Larisa puts her hands over mike a bright light comes from them...when the light dims out mike wakes up

    Mike: what happened, why is Kooz, knocked out on the floor? and...is that...JAIME!!

    Mike runs to hug Jaime

    Mike: its true! you are an angel, but how did you escape and why is one of your wings red? and ...woah! your the Jaime who keeps, secretly, giving me cards

    Jaime: oh mike so much you need to know

    ~~~~~~~~~~Jaime is telling the following story:~~~~~~~~~~

    Jaime is home cooking just before school dismisses and Mike comes home, she hears a knock and goes to the door, she opens it and she sees two men in black suits with shades at the door

    Jaime: may i help you?

    Man1: actually yes, but all you need to know for now is my name is Gad, and my partner's name is, Wendell

    The man puts some sort of "sphere" on the floor, the he and the other man put on gas masks, smoke starts to come out of the sphere and Jaime passes out

    Gad: alright put her in the back set and tie her up

    Wendell picks up Jaime ties her hands,feet and puts duct tape on her mouth

    Gad: now get in the car i'll drive

    As the car skids away, Mike sees the car go and runs after it he then falls down and becomes unconscious

    Gad: we are so in for a raise

    Wendell: i definitely hope so

    Gad: check on the girl will ya

    Wendell: where could she possibly go

    As Wendell turns around Jaime spreads her wings and goes out the roof-window

    Wendell: Gad shes out!!

    Gad: what!!

    Gad reaches for her leg but grabs the ropes instead and they fall of her

    Gad: idiot! do you know how to tie a knot?

    Wendell shrugs then the ropes on Jaime's hands and the duct tape on her mouth fall off

    Gad: IDIOT!!!

    The car comes to a sudden stop, when Gad and Wendell look for Jaime, she is far away

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Jaime: and after that i was following Mike around to help him

    Mike: wait but if your not really lost then what am i doing

    Castiel: theres more evil than just Gad, and Wendell there's the Dark King who is the evil of evil

    Chris: wow Jaime...thats an interesting story everything about you is interesting

    Larisa: that still doesnt explain why one of your wings is red

    Jaime: i had to pretend to be a double agent for them so i had this wing painted

    Mike:
    wow sis

    Jaime: yet i am sorry, because i cannot stay with you guys if they see me with you they will know i am actually not evil, but Mike i must tell you a few things about the dark side and their minions

    Mike: what is it

    Jaime: with the help of these cherubs you can stop the dark side from coming into play when you duel, when any rules from the dark side appear have Chris light up and Larisa can project it into a ray and aim at your hand then catch the ray mold it into a ball and look through it, this will create a stronger ray and make the Dark Side disappear for a few seconds then your opponent will be shocked...literally

    Chris: Thats easy

    Larisa: im sure i can do it

    Mike: uhm...

    Jaime: here practice on me

    Chris starts to light up, Larisa grabs Chris's shoulder and with the other hand produces a ray and shoots it at Mike's, hand, mike catches it, molds it into a ball and as hes putting it up to his eyes it disappears

    Jaime: that was good you just have to be quicker, now i have to go

    Chris: please dont

    Castiel: Jaime, thank you for all your help, but we still dont know where to go

    Mike: can you tell us where to go?

    Jaime: just go back to the house there you will know whats next

    Jaime disappears leaving behind another envelope
    Mike Grabs the envelope it immediately disappears


    Mike: well its in the deck now, you guys ready to go home?

    Larisa: sure, but i cant hold three hands to Castiel is gonna have to go into your deck as well

    Castiel: No Problem

    Castiel disappears, Larisa holds mike and Chris's hand, they all teleport back home

    Mike: i guess we have to find the clue then rent a hotel this place is a mess and its.... 3 AM...

    Chris: is this something?

    Larisa: Chris, it think you found something

    Mike: what is it?

    Larisa: a box, Chris open it

    Chris opens the box and a light comes out of it and shines on Chris' face

    Chris: AHHHHH!!!

    TO BE CONTINUED
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    ehh not too long today =P

    FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 12: A New Villains

    We are now in Mike's house after encountering his sister, and learning that Larisa and Chris are cherubs, Chris has found a box, opened it and light came out of it.

    Chris: AHHHHH!!!

    Larisa: Chris Let it go!

    Larisa slaps the box down to the floor

    Mike: Chris are you ok?

    Chris: yeah...im fine

    Mike: Castiel, do you know what that could've been?

    Castiel appears

    Castiel: no...Chris are you sure you feel normal?

    Larisa: like completely?

    Chris: yeah..i...i need to use the bathroom

    Mike: yeah, go ahead

    Chris turns his back to the crew, makes an evil smile, his eyes glow red, and proceeds to the bathroom

    Larisa: i hope he's ok

    Mike: me too, i wonder what that light did to him...and what the box means

    Castiel picks up the box and studies it without opening

    Castiel: Well there is some sort of...bulb, like a light bulb, on the four sides of it

    Mike: let me see

    Mike takes the box away from Castiel

    Larisa: maybe the bulbs tell us where to go or something

    Chris comes out of the bathroom and the bulb nearest to Chris shines brightly

    Chris: whats that

    Mike: im not sure

    Larisa: it seems to be telling us something about you

    Castiel: i think you might be on to something Larisa

    Chris: what are you guys talking about?

    Suddenly the box opened immensely and engulfed all 4 of them, then the box closed, the all seem to be falling down in pure...nothingness everything was blank, finally the fall on top of....more blankness, they arent hurt

    Larisa: where are we

    Chris: somewhere inside the box...

    Mike: everything is so ....empty and my duel disk is gone

    Castiel: we have to find a way to escape

    Mike: but theres like, literally, nothing around us!

    Chris: hmm...maybe if-

    Chris starts to glow, now everything is visible, they are in some sort of abandoned town in the middle of nowhere

    Larisa: nice going Chris! but where are we now...

    Mike: im not sure

    Stranger: What are you doing here?!

    They all turn around and recognize the stranger immediately

    Chris: y-your're Grandmaster of the Six Samurai...my key card!

    (Fallen Angels [Ch. 13 up now!!] Grandmasterofthesixsamurai)

    Grandmaster: Yes i am Grandmaster of the Six Samurai but im no card....

    Mike: is every monster here real?

    Grandmaster: Monster? What do you take me for! i Mean sure some of our inhabitants are ugly but not enough to be called monsters...

    Another "monster" comes behind Grandmaster

    Monster2: you ready, Grandmaster?

    Larisa: and y-y-your....

    Mike: Athena!

    Larisa: yeah, and your in my deck also

    (Fallen Angels [Ch. 13 up now!!] AthenaPP02-EN-ScR-UE)

    Athena: uhm...deck? anyways who are you?

    Larisa: im Larisa, this is my brother Chris, this is Mike, and thats Castiel over there

    Athena: welcome! are you staying for the--

    Loud crashes are heard...more like...giant footsteps

    Grandmaster: Oh no Hes back!

    Chris: who is

    Mike: who could be that huge...

    Castiel: Dark Armed Dragon?!?!

    Grandmaster: the freak with crow wings is right!

    Castiel: Hey!?!?! >:O

    Athena: we have to get out of here, follow me guys! Larisa take my hand

    Larisa grabs Athena's hand, Athena starts...hovering and leads the way

    Castiel: Hey grandmaster you got Chris, Mike hold on tight

    Castiel grabs mike and soars behind Athena, Grandmaster grabs Chris and puts him on his back then starts running very fast

    Dark Armed Dragon sees this


    DAD: Dont let them get away! Go forth, my minions!!!

    Evil Hero Inferno Wing appears and chases after Castiel, Element doom appears and chases after Grandmaster, Darknight Parshath Chases after athena


    TO BE CONTINUED




    Fallen Angels Chapter 13: The Wrath of Dark Armed Dragon

    Mike, Larisa, Chris and Castiel were all imprisoned in some box...then they realized there was a world inside the box, where all monsters were real everyone could see and touch them, but there was also a threat Dark armed dragon, he commands Evil Hero Inferno Wing Element doom Darknight Parshath to chase after Castiel, Grandmaster, and Athena


    Mike: we're not gonna make it Inferno Wing is faster than you

    Castiel: ugh thats such an insult to me...

    Chris: Element Doom is too fast he has both wings and fast feet

    Grandmaster: im getting tired

    Chris: try to keep going buddy...c'mon

    Larisa: Darknight is too fast can't you go any faster?

    Athena: im afraid not...but they dont want me...i know who you are now...i need to get you safe

    Larisa: wha---

    Athena threw Larisa up high and caused Grandmaster to trip and throw Chris up as well

    Castiel: what in the world!?!

    Mike: oh no! we gotta save em, Castiel

    Castiel: i cant carry all three of you

    Athena and Grandmaster shoot down Element Doom, Inferno Wing, and Darknight then they disappear

    Chris & Larisa: Someone Help!!!!

    Mike: ugh someone has got to do something!

    Just then Mike remembered something that had happened to him the day before and immediately his Duel Disk Reappeared, Mike drew a card and held it up high

    Mike: Come forth, Aeolus!! Save my friends
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    Aeolus: Im afraid i can only carry one

    Chris: AHHH!!!

    Mike: catch Chris!

    Aeolus followed the sound of Chris' voice and catched him then put him down, Castiel put Mike down and they both raced up to try and catch Larisa
    She was going down faster and when she got to the floor she landed safely, her duel disk appeared and was glowing


    Chris: What the heck is wrong with Athena!

    Larisa: its ok...im ok now

    Mike: i think it was Jaime... every time she gives me an envelope with more cards my duel disk glows like that too

    Castiel comes back down Aeolus goes back into a card and in Mikes deck

    Chris: we have to get out of here before Dark Armed Dragon sends more of his minions against us

    DAD: Wrong!!! I'll just come myself

    Mike: Oh no

    Larisa: what do you want!

    DAD: A Duel!!!

    Castiel: what?

    Chris: why do you want a duel with us

    DAD: not with you, Chris, i want a duel with Larisa and Mike

    Castiel: why?

    DAD: because i said so, now Nightmare Steelcage!!!

    Steelcage surrounds Castiel and Chris

    DAD: and now you have no choice

    Mike: but it's two versus one

    DAD: yes, but two are you and one is a giant, armed dragon who can control if you live or not

    Larisa: fair with me

    DAD: now lets duel

    Mike: uhh...ready Larisa?

    Larisa: Always!!

    DAD's, Mike's and Larisa's LP is set to 4000, and all three players draw their opening hand

    DAD: i'll start, now i draw, Perfect, i discard Plaguespreader Zombie to special summon Dark Grepher [4*1700/1600]

    DARK GREPHER: You can discard 1 Level 5 or higher DARK monster to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can discard 1 DARK monster to send 1 DARK monster from your Deck to your Graveyard.


    DAD: now i activate Plaguespreader Zombie's effect i return one of the cards in my hand to special summon him in attack mode [2*400/200]

    PLAGUE:You can return 1 card from your hand to the top of the Deck to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If you do, remove this card from play when it is removed from the field.


    Larisa: this isnt good...

    DAD: not for you anyways, now i tribute Dark Grepher to summon Vampire's Curse [6*2000/800] now i Tune Plaguespreader Zombie and Vampire's Curse to synchro summon Dark End Dragon [8*2600/2100]

    Mike: Whoa! talk about strong move

    Larisa: Can you end now, we wanna take that dragon down along with you

    DAD: haha i love how you measly little things think you can defeat me, ill set two cards face down and i'll end my mve

    Larisa: My move! i Draw, (to herself) whoa i've never seen this card before...better keep it for a while (out loud) i'll play one monster face down in defense and ill set one card face down, ill end for now

    Mike: alright my move now! i draw, (to himself) hmm new cards they seem useful (out loud) i activate Angel Call Fallen Angels [Ch. 13 up now!!] 376652
    which lets me look through my deck and choose an angel monster to take to my hand, and i choose Angel of Death, and i summon her in attack mode
    Fallen Angels [Ch. 13 up now!!] 376652
    then i activate her effect which destroys your monster and it costs me only 1300 Life Points, go Angel of Death! Scepter of death

    Angel of Death slashes at Dark End Dragon with her scepter, and Mike's LP drops to 2700

    Larisa: Nice move Mike!

    DAD: hmm...strong

    Mike: now i activate Heavy Storm

    DAD: Grrr

    DAD's Mirror Force and Magic Cylinder got destroyed, Larisa's Magical Arm Shield is also destroyed

    Mike: sorry Larisa

    Larisa: its fine

    Mike: now, Angel of Death, attack directly

    DAD's LP drops to 2400

    DAD: my turn now, i draw

    Larisa: nothing you can draw can defeat us now

    DAD: i think you forgot who i am, and what's in my grave

    Mike: exactly 3 dark monster!! oh no!

    DAD: yes, because plaguespreader got removed from play, so its dark grapher, vampire's curse, and thanks to mike, Dark End Dragon, so i Summon MYSELF!
    and i activate my special ability, by removing from my grave Dark End Dragon i can destroy Angel of Death, which means i can attack you directly and you will not only lose the duel but your soul as well

    Larisa: no!

    TO BE CONTINUED

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