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    Raging Battle: Chapter 1

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    Post by Jesse Sun Aug 15, 2010 4:31 am

    This is my first time creating a Fan Fic so don't bag on me if you don't like it. Razz

    Color will be added later. When i want to add it Razz


    Raging Battle Chapter One: A Champion's Dream!


    We Start off with a duel that has just began. After Jesse, a young student in Turbo Duel Academy, bumped into a new student.Which leads to a duel that were tuning into now.

    Jesse: Alright I'll go first! Draw! * Jesse Thinks..Heh wow i drew him on my first turn*

    ????: Hey, Jesse! Who are you dueling?

    Jesse: Huh? * Jesse Turns around * Oh it's you Zach.

    Zack: Duh -.- Anyway who are you dueling?

    Jesse: Just this random guy that got mad at me for barely bumping into him.

    Zach: Wow thats kinda something stupid to get mad about.

    Skat: Are you gonna make your move any time this year?

    Jesse: Fine....Jeez

    Skat: Just go...

    Jesse: I end my turn.

    Skat: But you didn't even do anything! You must be weaker than i thought!

    *Jesse Grins*

    Jesse: Just go, this is gonna be over quick. Razz

    Skat: What's that suppose to mean...-.- Fine.. anyway this is gonna be easy! I active the Continuous spell card Machina Armored Unit!

    Jesse: Do you like being wrong all the time?

    Skat: Ugh...( He is so annoying... )

    Effect: Once per turn, when a Machine-Type monster is destroyed by battle and sent to your Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster with lower ATK and the same Attribute from your Deck

    Skat: Then i summon Machina Sniper[4*1800/800]in Attack mode! Attack now!

    Jesse's LP: 2200
    Skat's LP: 4000


    Jesse: I activate Gorz the Emissary of Darkness's effect!

    Zach: Wow Nice Move Jesse...* Says in sarcastic voice *

    Jesse: -.- Don't mock me peasant.

    Effect:When you take damage from a card your opponent controls while you control no cards, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Then activate the appropriate effect, based on the type of damage:
    ● Battle Damage: Special Summon 1 "Emissary of Darkness Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 7/ATK ?/DEF ?). Its ATK and DEF are each equal to the amount of battle damage you took.
    ● Effect Damage: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the damage you took.


    Jesse: I summon both Gorz[7*2700/2500] and my token[7*1800/1800] in attack mode!

    Skat: Ugh...I'll set a card and end my turn... * Skat thinks * Oh man it looks like i'm in trouble...

    Jesse: Alright I'll draw! I summon The Flamvell Magician [4*1400/200] in attack mode! Token Attack Machina Sniper!

    * Both the Token and Machina Sniper are destroyed *

    Skat: Since you destroyed him Machina Armored Units effect activates! Which lets me Special summon Machina Soldier from my deck in defense mode!

    Jesse: Fine. Gorz attack!

    * Machina Soldier is destroyed *

    Jesse: Now Flamvell Magician attack him directly!

    Jesse's LP: 2200
    Skat's LP: 2600


    Jesse: I throw down a face down and end my turn.

    Skat: Finally....I draw!...I Summon Scrap Recycler [3*900/1200] in attack mode!

    Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, you can select and send 1 Machine-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can return 2 Level 4 Machine-Type EARTH monsters from your Graveyard to the Deck to draw 1 card.


    Skat: Also i activate his effect and Send Commander Covington from my deck to the grave. I also activate his second effect I send the 2 monsters you destroyed last turn and put them back in my deck to draw 1 card....I end my turn.

    Jesse: Well..Looks like you lose Razz .....I activate Brain Control just in case to take control of your Scrap Recyler.

    Jesse's LP: 1400
    Skat's LP: 2600


    Jesse: Now Gorz attack him directly!

    * Skat's LP drop to 0 *

    Jesse: That was a sweet duel! Drawing Gorz on my first turn was pretty sweet huh. Razz

    Skat: Ugh yea whatever.

    Jesse: Whats wrong? Don't be embarrased it was a good duel.

    Skat: Just leave me alone and never bump into me again...

    * Skat Walks away *

    Jesse: Fine -.- Oh Crap! I'm late for class Ms. Strife is gonna kill me!

    Zach: Well there isn't really any reason to go now..considering that theres only like 5 minutes left.

    Jesse: Yea but i heard that Ms. Strife was giving away free cards today! By the Way why aren't you in class?

    Zach: I asked Ms. Strife if could go to the bathroom about an hour ago.

    Jesse: Wow....Anyway where is my Sis at?

    Zach: You mean Susan? I think she left a couple hours ago hours ago because she had a stomach ache.

    Jesse: Oh ok well i'm going to class. See ya!

    END OF CHAPTER ONE

    Tell me how it is and if you like it or not!





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    Post by Pharmacist Sun Aug 15, 2010 4:49 am

    Lol simple duel really just gorz and brain in opening hand
    nice article though dude
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    Post by Glovenaut Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:38 am

    nice, I liked it. keep up the good work
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    Post by Giapostolo Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:02 am

    Where iz me o.O
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    Post by Jesse Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:29 am

    Lol Im still editing this all of this.

    Chapter 2 will be out probably in a couple days. ( Haven't Started Razz )
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    Post by Yuri Bakura Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:32 am

    good work xD i wanna read chapter 2 xD
    very simple duel lol
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    Post by IversonSt3 Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:06 pm

    So Simple! >.<

    Try adding imagination & some plot! Wink

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