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    Unclear path! Chapter 2: Changes...

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    Post by Shade Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:28 pm

    As i and golash saw there many interesting stories! We decided to write our own one. It would be nice if you could comment it and correct some mistakes, because we are not form english speaking country, so there can be some mistakes Wink So here we go!





    Chapter 1: Big dreams...




    It was cold autumn evening and two teenagers played card game called Yu-Gi-Oh.
    They imagined they are playing in a big tournament final. They were so deep in the game that didn't notice it's already late.
    First boy was 15 years old brown haired duelist. He got green-brown eyes and dark closes. He was calm and quiet. But his friend was a bit older and got fair brown hair.
    His deep green eyes looked like divine grasslands. And together with his black t-shirt and fair blue jeans he looked like movie star. Their names were Shade and Golash.


    Golash: Hey dude! Maybe you can give up right now? There is no reason to waste our time, because it's already clear that i will win.

    Shade: Come on, if you are so scared of me than just say so. Only place where you can beat me is in your dreams and even there with big effort.

    Golash: Ok man, talk is cheap! Lets duel!

    Shade: As you wish... This time GO and sLASH tactic won't work Golash Very Happy

    Golash:
    I'll go first. Draw. Oh, nice one. I summon Morphtronic Slingen in defence position, set 2 facedowns and that's all for now.

    Shade: And that's your monster??? Myahahaha!!! Wanna see real monster, look at this. I summon Toon Alligator in defence position and set 2 facedowns as well. I think i'll end my turn.

    Suddenly their game was stopped by some boy who run in and ruin this great duel.

    Boy: Hey boys! Did you hear about tournament in Crown city?

    Golash: No! Tell us something more about it...

    Boy: I don't know much, but as i heard it will start next monday and i think it would be great if both of you could participate there and show your skill to public.

    Shade: Yeah Golash that is our chance to reach something in life. Will you come with me?

    Golash: I don't know. I think it is a bad idea...

    Shade: Why you think so?

    Golash: We can't beat anyone with those decks...

    Shade: Are you kidding me? I won you 10 times with my deck and you won me 11 with your. Our decks are unstoppable.

    Golash: If you say so... I still think it is a bad idea.

    Shade: Come on, don't be so critical. Please come with me.

    Golash:
    OH well.. I'll go, but just because of you.

    Shade: Thanks mate! I knew you never let me down...

    And so two boys got a chance to change something in their lives. They worked hard all week to earn money for bus tickets and waited for their first tournament.

    Finally came monday and they got into bus and drived to Crown city.





    Bus slowly stopped in station and both friends got out of it and run to arena. It was sunny day and all seems to be fine. They didn't care about anything, they just
    run and sparkle in their eyes showed how happy they are about this chance. Even critical Golash was happier than ever.

    Shade: Faster mate! We don't want to be late.

    Golash: Yeah, yeah! I just enjoy these sights. This is my first time in city, so i hope you know where we are running...

    Shade: Don't worry about that, i know all we need to know... Just keep running!

    Golash: Hey dude! Is this arena or i'm dreaming??? So big... Now i can show my skills to everyone!!! Yeah!!!

    Shade: Yeah it is... Now calm down and get ready for a tourney...

    Golash: Don't worry about me... Better worry about yourself... My victory is already predicted, so don't even aim for it!!!

    Shade: Don't be so confident... There are a lot of strong duelists, so keep your eyes opened and don't lose concentration!!!

    Golash: What did you say??? Ah, nevermind... Can't wait for my first duel!!!

    Shade:(thinks) I hope his confidence won't make trouble for he... Hey Golash!!! There is registration, lets go there.

    Golash: OK im coming.

    Administrator: How can i help you?

    Shade: We want to join this tournament!

    Adminsitrator: Oh, I see, just wait a second, i'll just register you and your friend..........Ok it's ok. You can go now and wait for a opening ceremony.

    Shade: You heard that Golash? Golash??? Hey dude where are you? (thinks) Where did he go? I need to find him.
    Oh there you are! Don't go anywhere without me!

    Golash: Ok, ok! Just calm down, don't need to worry about me... Gonna be ok! Hey you heard that? Open ceremony started! Lets go!

    Shade: Ok wait for me!!!

    Both boys entered in arena and were shocked about how much people were there...

    Golash: It's impossible :O Looks like there is whole city.

    Shade: Yeah, you are rigt... Look there! It is DanceJonDance! He is my hero!

    Golash: Come on dude! He is nothing more than amateur... But The Detonator is a real pro!!!

    Shade: Ok whatever! Just get ready for a battle. Lets see what are our opponents in first round!!!
    OMG! Thats incredible! Your first opponent is DanceJonDance, but mine is The Detonator!

    Golash: Perfect, we can start this tourney with victories against main favourites!!!

    Shade: It won't be so easy dude!

    Golash: Come on it will be easier than you think...

    Shade: will see about that...


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    Post by Janembo Sat Apr 17, 2010 6:46 pm

    Nice beggining Razz Keep it up x]
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    Post by Shade Sat Apr 17, 2010 6:53 pm

    Will try to do my best.
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    Post by CatGirl Tue Apr 20, 2010 3:26 am

    Wow! ^^ This is exciting. A few minors that can be easily fixed, but other than that, I enjoyed the humor of you and golash soon-to-be dueling DJD and Det. Can't wait for what'll happen next. study

    Great job Shade, nice work. Smile

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    Post by DanceJonDance Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:33 am

    aw man you guys are gonna eliminate us in the first few chapters D: how cheap.
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    Post by Janembo Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:56 am

    People come and go Razz
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    Post by DanceJonDance Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:56 am

    just like janembo in the tda chronicles ;]
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    Post by Janembo Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:57 am

    Unfortunalty Razz But still I'm famous xD
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    Post by DanceJonDance Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:58 am

    no you're a murdering brat D:
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    Post by Janembo Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:00 am

    If you put it that way....yeah Sad But still I was world champ so I'm still famous xD
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    Post by CatGirl Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:03 am

    @ DJD: Well Shade sure sees ya as his big hero. ^^
    An adoring fan like him wants a piece of action from you. Very Happy

    @ Janembo: You're famous no matter what it is. xD
    It's written in Duelist History Books.

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    Post by the jancok Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:33 am

    Nice one^^,keep it up......... ;].
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    Post by WilBer Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:05 am

    Well nice 1

    KIU ^^
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    Post by Shade Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:26 pm

    Chapter 2: Changes...













    Commentator: And sooo lets start the first round duels!!!
    All duelists go and take your places!!!


    Shade: Golash you heard
    that??


    Golash: WHat? You said
    something?


    Shade:
    Come on dude, wake
    up, we need to get ready for a duel!!!


    Golash: Oh rigt! Lets go!!!


    Both boys went to their firsts duels and both were excited
    about that. But then their ways seperated. (But none of them knew that this
    tourney will be a start for something new in their lifes.)


    Golash felt so confident that didn't even care about this
    duel, but Shade was a bit cautious about his duel.


    (All duelists took their places and duels may begin).


    Shade: Good Luck and Have
    Fun Detonator!!!Lets have a nice duel!!!


    The Detonator: Did you said something? Speak louder you little
    punk!!! OK nevermind, lets duel!


    LP 8000 : LP 8000


    Shade: Grr...Ok duel! My
    move! Draw! Hmm! I summon Toon Mermaid in defense mode and end my turn!


    The Detonator: Draw! This will be faster than i thought! I
    acivate hand destruction! Both of us must send 2 card to grave and draw 2 new
    ones! Then i activate it again!

    Now I can Special summon Judgment dragon ,because i have 4
    lightsworn monsters with different names in my graveyard!

    By paying 1000 lp i can destroy your little toonie! Than i
    special summon 1 more Judgment Dragon! Since i got 2 light monsters on the field i can special summon Guardian of Order! And finally i summon Lumina Lightswornd summoner! Now my troops end this!!

    LP 0 : LP 8000

    Shade: Noooo! I lose! But
    anyway good game The Detonator!

    The Detonator: Yeah good game for me, but for you it wasn't
    even a game! Muahahahah!!!



    In same time Golash started duel against DanceJonDance


    Golash: Hey DanceJonDance,
    good luck and have fun!!


    DanceJonDance: Luck is for loosers like you, so please shut
    up, I wanna end this fast!!! Lets duel!!


    Golash: Calm down big boy!!
    I'm not here for loosing, i'm here for kicking your ass!!!


    LP 8000 : LP 8000


    DanceJonDance: I said shut up!!! I'll start. Draw...Set 2
    facedwons and end my turn!


    Golash: And thats your move?
    Muahahaha!!!! Draw...(thinks)Ah, bad draw, but that's ok i can bet he got
    nothing as well...Hmm only monsters, what to do,what to do?
    I summon Morphtronic radion in attack mode... When he is
    face up atack possition he gains extra 800 points, so get ready for some action Dancy!!!


    DanceJonDance: Not so fast! I ativate Bottomless Trap Hole!
    Say good bye to your piece of metal.


    Golash: That wasn't
    nice...that's all for now, but wait till next turn, then i'll show you what real pain is...


    DanceJonDance: Unfortunately, but there wont be next turn
    for you, because Now I activate my trap card Ultimate Offering! Then i summon
    Blackwing - Blizzard the Far North in attack mode, then i activate spell card Black Whirlwind,
    then i activate Ultimate Offering's effect.. by paying 500 lp i can summon one more monster for each 500 lp i pay. So i tribute summon Blackwing - Sirroco the Dawn, now
    i activate Black wirlwinds eff and take form deck Blacwing monster who got less attack than one which I summoned. I pick Blackwing - Shura the Blue Flame. Then i
    pay another 500 lp tu summon shura. activate whirlwind effect again, take Blackwing - Bora the Spear, than I summon it and pick Blackwing - Kalut the Moon Shadow and
    summon him as well. And finally i summon Blackwing - Fane the Steel Chain. Then i activate Sirroco effect and my Fane gets attack equal to attack of all my blackwing monsters on
    the field..


    Golash:
    It's still not enough...


    DanceJonDance: It will be....I activate spell card United We
    Stand and my monster gets 4000 more attack points,800 for every monster I got on field and now finish that little dork..


    LP 8000 : LP 0


    Golash: Noooooo!!!! I can't
    believe i lost so easily..... Stupid game, stupid cards!!!


    Golash just turned around and slowly walked to the exit,he
    stopped for a moment and he took his card,looked at them and then with anger and tears in his eyes he threw them, and continue to walk further..


    Shade
    : Golash wait!!!!
    Hey dude, how did your duel end??? Where are you going??


    Golash:
    Who cares..

    Shade: Whats wrong with you??? Did you lose??

    Golash: Yeah I lose and that's all was just your
    fault!!!...If you would't come up with the great idea to come here, then this would never happen....

    Shade: But i just was trying to help us.....


    Golash: Now you can only help yourself, because im leaving....


    Shade just watched how Golash slowly walked away from his
    sight

    Shade felt like he would never see him again...That looked
    like the end of their friendship...
    (But that was only the beggining of their new lifes.)


    Shade went back to arena and saw Golash cards..he took them and one more time remembered for his friend....
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    Post by Janembo Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:21 pm

    OTK Razz
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    Post by Shade Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:29 pm

    Of course! What else we can expect from pro players? Very Happy We were just a noobs so no wonder about that!
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    Post by DanceJonDance Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:31 pm

    little mistakes there:
    1. I'm not a jerk
    2. You can't bottomless trap hole Morphtronic Radion, it has 1000 original ATK. Change the trap to trap hole instead.

    Good chapter.
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    Post by Janembo Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:33 pm

    Beeing noob FTW Smile
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    Post by Shade Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:03 pm

    Dance! http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_Rulings_talk:Morphtronic_Radion

    I checked before post, but maybe you are right about Radion!
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    Post by Gothicmess Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:06 pm

    Good read, but not every pro duelist will search OTK.

    @DJD

    Actually you can BtH Radion o.o

    Any continues effect is applied as soon as the monster is summon, thus BtH activates after the monster has been summon with 1800.

    Same with Frogs with wetlands and any similar effect
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    Post by CatGirl Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:12 pm

    Such drama Shade. Smile Good job. Very Happy

    ~ cat
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    Post by Shade Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:22 pm

    Tnx for comments Smile
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    Post by golash Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:32 pm

    yeah.!!..nice job Shade...!! Cant wait to see what will happen in Chapter 3...!!
    Very Happy
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    Post by Shade Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:34 pm

    Haha Golash! We both know that im not the only one who writes this story!

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